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My window page needs your critique!!!
From Bradley at The Fundraising Bank on 31 August '98

Hello there!!!

I need you help! I have created two pages:


The second address is a window for the main page (which is the first URL address)..

I would GREATLY appreciate it if you could comment on my pages. I have a decent search engine listing with excite for the first URL address, but that is it? What can I do to improve things. I think I have high keyword density (especiall in the second one), but I don't see any results. The competition doesn't have very sophisticated programming (I look at their source code), but they seem to get higher results than me. What are your suggestions????

Is one of my problems being on a members.aol.com address?

I really look forward to your critique and I will DEFINITELY use it as constructive criticism.



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