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Critique Request, please
From Rance E at Partyrama Online on 4 Feb '00
Hi everyone,
Well, after my first critique request, I redesigned the entire site using all of your suggestions (thank you, btw!) And I'd like to submit it for your approval once again. :) I know we're supposed to have a fair amount of descriptive text on the first page for search engine purposes, but I'm not certain how to do this on this home page without destroying the clean concise look of the page. Any advice? Would a doorway or splash page be a good answer? Note that the database has only a few 'test' entries in it, and the product graphics are still being revamped. Please let me know what you think of the interface, design, and general 'intuitiveness' of the site.
Thanks in advance,
Rance Edwards,
Partyrama Online

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