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Re: Site is getting in a rut. suggestions please.
From Nan at Copywriting that sells! on 21 March '00
replying to Site is getting in a rut. suggestions please. posted by Andy


Andy:

It's certainly a bright site!

I guess my question would be -- what is the purpose of the site? Just for *club* news? Or are you trying to recruit new members? If the latter, there is a lot of gaps in information.

I think it would be much more interesting if there was some ongoing discussion about club activities -- something that gets regularly updated. And of course, names and perhaps comments with the pictures (or maybe they're already there? I didn't wait for everything to download -- too slow).

One other teensy weensy thing -- in the text on the first page, the word should be *is* not *in* -- "The purpose of the ..... is ...." :-)

Just a couple of things to think about.

Nan




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