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Re: Site is getting in a rut. suggestions please. From Nan at Copywriting that sells! on 21 March '00 replying to Site is getting in a rut. suggestions please. posted by Andy Andy: It's certainly a bright site! I guess my question would be -- what is the purpose of the site? Just for *club* news? Or are you trying to recruit new members? If the latter, there is a lot of gaps in information. I think it would be much more interesting if there was some ongoing discussion about club activities -- something that gets regularly updated. And of course, names and perhaps comments with the pictures (or maybe they're already there? I didn't wait for everything to download -- too slow). One other teensy weensy thing -- in the text on the first page, the word should be *is* not *in* -- "The purpose of the ..... is ...." :-) Just a couple of things to think about. Nan

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> >Andy: > >It's certainly a bright site! > >I guess my question would be -- what is the purpose of the site? Just for *club* news? Or are you trying to recruit new members? If the latter, there is a lot of gaps in information. > >I think it would be much more interesting if there was some ongoing discussion about club activities -- something that gets regularly updated. And of course, names and perhaps comments with the pictures (or maybe they're already there? I didn't wait for everything to download -- too slow). > >One other teensy weensy thing -- in the text on the first page, the word should be *is* not *in* -- "The purpose of the ..... is ...." :-) > >Just a couple of things to think about. > >Nan