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From Nan at What You Need to Succeedw on 13 April '00
replying to Re: Feedback desperately needed posted by Nancy

Nancy:

Your work is lovely! But you definitely need to give visitors a "reason to buy." Devoting the first paragraph to the history just doesn't "do it" for me.

Also, as another poster commented, the text runs off the edge of the page. AND ... there are two many "moving parts" (the scrolling messages, the fairy, etc.) It's very distracting.

You title your page "The Ceramic of Nancy Online" but then you don't talk about yourself. I think visitors would like to know who "Nancy" is.

Just a couple of observations from my first-page visit only.

Nan




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