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Re: Message for Deb - Important !!
From Deb on 20 April '00
replying to Re: Message for Deb - Important !! posted by Nancy

>Ciao Deb ! Come stai ? (Hi Deb How are you ?)

>Your feedback is very constructive !!

>I'm going to change some things soon.
>You speak about Anglicize the text, what do you mean ?

I mean make it grammatically correct in English. For example:

"So visit us often so to get the latest news from us"

Should read:

"Visit us often to get the latest news on special offers"

or something to that effect. The first sentence is improper English,
the second corrected one makes more sense...globally...

There are other examples of this on your site, and I thought perhaps
having it reviewed for these types of grammatical errors would benefit
the overall marketing of the site.

Anglicizing means changing something to "English" :)

It was just a thought...

Buono Notte,

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