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Re: Yahoo...again
From marge on 2 March '99
replying to Yahoo...again posted by Rob

>DESCRIPTION:
>
>"Provides a nice collection of resources that will help you lose weight including free articles, discussion rooms, recipe databases, product reviews + much more!"

just thinking of keyword density in your description...

with that in mind, I'd omit the "provides a nice collection of"

resources that will help you lose weight including free articles,
discussion rooms, recipe databases, product reviews + much more!"


why not:

resources that helped me lose weight

it SOUNDS more positive.

free weightloss articles, diet discussion rooms, low fat,
low carb, low calorie recipe databases, product reviews, + more!

I'd like to see you work in as many keywords as possible in the
description, and still have it "look good'


>I would really appreciate it if you could give me some suggestions or comments on what I am planning to submit.




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