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Re: Please review my site
From Richie on 29 Jan '01
replying to Please review my site posted by Scott M

>Hello
>
>Please take a look at my site www.dejavu-inc.com and let me know what you think.
>Any suggestions are most appreciated.
>
>-Scott


In your 'online store', make some of the text highlighted or bigger so your eyes are quickly drawn to it... It's too tough to read otherwise. Make the reader automatically be able to read KEY WORD SEARCH, SEARCH BY DESC, etc.. I like slightly larger and maybe a highlighted color or italics... Get it?

Also, I highly recommend you lose the Web libs and the magic 8 ball. You may want your customers to have fun on your site, but that's not why they are there. I feel that you kinda lose credibility when you play around like that. Not that you shouldn't have fun, but this is a business site and should only pertain to that. Make a personal page and put that stuff on there. Do you see any other professional sites with that content? Just my thoughts. Other than that you have a nice site and it should work well. Now you need to advertise it.

Rich




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