Re: Canadian FleamarketFrom jwj on 9 July '01
replying to Canadian Fleamarket posted by Brian Kapeluk
As has been said here, you need to get to the point on the first page. First I learn that you sell "items". To tell us that these items are exotic and hard to find still doesn't tell us what the "items" are. Finally seeing a list of products, to find "teen girls" among them was confusing. Made me think we'd been lured to something sinister or at least in poor taste.
If you consider it a fleamarket, call it that. I don't see that word anywhere I looked.
Also, first page: best to have *one* logo, one or zero mentions of "welcome to" and no scrolling information.
Redo your description line to say what it is you sell or give at least a hint. If your inventory is too big to say what you sell, say, "quality, low cost items such as..." examples, even pictures, and say "hundreds of other items" or something.