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Re: Check it out.--Any Better?
From Melanie at Where 2 Market on 19 Sept '99
replying to Re: Check it out.--Any Better? posted by Kevin

This is much better!!!

Here are some more suggestions:

1) The text on the banner is jagged. Try this:
<img src="">

2) The background is too bright... Try this:
<img src="" border=1>

3) The sentences are too long. Try breaking them up into smaller
sentences, so they are easier to read. You may also try to use
bold, italic and underline to bring reader's attention to the
most important points.

4) You use the Java applet fphover.class for the order button.
Because of that, the Netscape users will experience the delay
(Netscape gets stuck "Starting Java", and it's annoying). Unless
you really need to use Java, try to avoid it. In your case for the
order button, a simple MouseOver Javascipt will do (similar to
your navigation buttons on the right).


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