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Re: Please review my site
From Derek at on 22 Oct '99
replying to Re: Please review my site posted by Dawn

>>This is the first site I have ever built and I was wondering what can be done to improve it? I would really like suggestions on how to improve the site's ranking with the search engines. Also, Does the site load too slow? I was thinking about ditching the music to improve load time. Let me know what you think.
>Derek, the beginning sentence is redundant. I think it would read
>better if you combine the first two sentences. ( I am a REALTOR)

Yes, now that I look at it, it does seem the first two sentences are somewhat redundant. I didn't notice that before. It would probably sound better if I combined them, but the only problem with combining them is I would loose some keywords in those sentences by doing that. I probably will combine them anyway because it would sound better. Thanks.

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