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Re: Please reveiw/ critique my site
From Thad at Dental Distortions on 4 Nov '99
replying to Re: Please reveiw/ critique my site posted by IonZone

>>Any feedback would be greatly appreciated, good and bad. Thanks
>I like your product. Now the bad; your meta tags are wrong. Remove the commas from the description tag. The keyword tag needs to be reworked, concentrate more on words or specific phrase rather than weird phrases, don't repeat a word more than 3 times "WE". Your title is too long.
>Most important, DITCH THE BACKGROUND. I know you like it and I know you worked hard on it. But, it makes the text very hard to read and looks very unprofessional. Try leaving the background white. Yes its a little boring but what are you trying to sell web design or fake teeth. You should not have anything on your page which makes it distracting for the user to buy teeth.


Thanks for the critique. I agree with you concerning the background, it doesn't work as long as there is ANY type on it and it is distracting. I will also take your advice about the META tags and keywords, this is relatively new to me (I've been online for about a month). If you pay for postage (about 4 bucks) I'll send you a free set of teeth for your helpful input; let me know at

Regards, Thad

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