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Re: site review
From Liliane at THE SHUTTLE - Handwoven in Scotland on 1 Sept '00
replying to site review posted by Michelle Mounts

>If anyone has time I would really appreciate a critique of my site. It's almost complete but is not yet listed in the SE's and I've had only a few visits.

Hi Michelle

I would say so far so good but I think you still have a lot of work to
do before your site is finished.

You need to "talk" to your visitors from your site, it's the only way
you can reach out to them and entice them to enter and eventually buy
something. As yet it is more like an empty window displaying a few note
stickers. Also, make sure all your pages link to each other so visitors
don't get stuck in a deadend street.

Sorry if I sound like I'm putting your site down but on the contrary
only trying to help.

Also, before you submit to SEs you should add META tags for description
and keywords between the <HEAD></HEAD> of your pages.

Hope this helps and good luck.

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