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Re: site review
From Michelle at Aloha Gifts and Jewelry on 1 Sept '00
replying to Re: site review posted by Liliane

>>If anyone has time I would really appreciate a critique of my site. It's almost complete but is not yet listed in the SE's and I've had only a few visits.
>Hi Michelle
>I would say so far so good but I think you still have a lot of work to
>do before your site is finished.
>You need to "talk" to your visitors from your site, it's the only way
>you can reach out to them and entice them to enter and eventually buy
>something. As yet it is more like an empty window displaying a few note
>stickers. Also, make sure all your pages link to each other so visitors
>don't get stuck in a deadend street.

Those were the exact type of comments I was looking for. Thank you very much for taking the time to check it out!


>Sorry if I sound like I'm putting your site down but on the contrary
>only trying to help.
>Also, before you submit to SEs you should add META tags for description
>and keywords between the <HEAD></HEAD> of your pages.
>Hope this helps and good luck.

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