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Re: Please review my site.
From aBelle at Designs by aBelle on 5 Nov '99
replying to Re: Please review my site. posted by Tom

>Let me rephrase that....I would like to get anyones opinion of my site.
>This is my first site and would like some feedback. Good or bad.
>
>Thanks

Great Job!!

Neat product. I especially like the graphic display of the banners on vehicles! One suggestion, in your description tag, I'd put:

"The Fangate is a banner that straps to the tailgate of your pickup truck or SUV, and has officially licensed collegiate logos printed on them."

rather than repeating the title. I picked out that sentence from your page, but you can reword it to a description that suits you.

Also, I would change the keywords and description to suit each page, rather than using the same one.

Hard to believe that this is your first site!





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