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Re: A Web Design Site For Your Critique From Janette on 28 Nov '99 replying to Re: A Web Design Site For Your Critique posted by Nicholas Hi, I'm a beginning web designer. I thought your site looked good. I don't like the blue with the red and grey color scheme and I would break that same line it into 2 seperate lines. It's too long and doesn't flow. A little friendly input! Janette >>Hi everyone, >> >>I recently completed my web design site (www.eddesign.net). I have 6 years experience in design for government/commercial clients, 4 in web design. >> >>I would appreciate your critique and comments! > >You have the graphics skills. You have the track record. > >But they're concealed by heavy graphics, poor navigation >(mouseover, yuck), and a not-quite-perfect color sense. >Also, quit trying to justify yourself. You have a record, >let it stand for itself. > >Reminds me of an editor who used to comment how good writers would >"hide their finest gems, much as though waiting for the editor's >Easter egg hunt."

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>Hi, I'm a beginning web designer. I thought your site looked good. >I don't like the blue with the red and grey color scheme >and I would break that same line it into 2 seperate lines. It's too long >and doesn't flow. > >A little friendly input! >Janette > > > > > >>>Hi everyone, >>> >>>I recently completed my web design site (www.eddesign.net). I have 6 years experience in design for government/commercial clients, 4 in web design. >>> >>>I would appreciate your critique and comments! >> >>You have the graphics skills. You have the track record. >> >>But they're concealed by heavy graphics, poor navigation >>(mouseover, yuck), and a not-quite-perfect color sense. >>Also, quit trying to justify yourself. You have a record, >>let it stand for itself. >> >>Reminds me of an editor who used to comment how good writers would >>"hide their finest gems, much as though waiting for the editor's >>Easter egg hunt."