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Re: Requesting Your Critique
From Deb on 27 Dec '99
replying to Requesting Your Critique posted by Lonny

O.K. Broadshoulders....here goes...

The page design is terrific! Very nautical, very inviting...

The links once your in the site itself are a bit obscure, meaning
I agree with the IZ, you need far more informative sailing related
subjects, and I second the vote to lose the music....

I'd suggest you start a page that compares different types of
sail boats, their pro's and con's, pricing structure, who and
what makes the 'creme de la creme' of yatchs, etc., even a page
which critique's sailing lessons, the good, the bad and the to
be avoided at all costs"!!! Also a link to the US COAST GUARD's
'rules of the sea' (or whatever they're called) would be of help....

Then also include a free advertising page for 'used boats', heck
you could become the "Ebay" or shipmart.com of sailing/yatching..
I know there are magazines on-line as well, such as Yatching
or the Robb Report that would appeal to the sailing set, you could
link to those as well...

To give a complete overall service orientation to your site
you'll want to cover as many bases as possible...this will
generate one heck of a lot of traffic, enabling you to become
"a 'lighthouse' in the virtual sea of WEB surfers" <you can gag
now>
I'm sure it's become apparent I personally am not a sailor,
but there are many, many of them out there who would enjoy a page
devoted to nothing but their passion....cause I've rarely met a
more fanatical group of sporting folk in my life!!!

Deb





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