I'm a Little Late|
From Nan at Copywriting that sells!
on 29 Jan '00
replying to Site critique, please posted by Jonathan
I just joined this forum today -- for some reason I never came across it before.
In any event, I didn't see the site before the changes, but I do like the brown and gold -- but you need some green. Green leaves around the acorn maybe?
I would also like to see you jazz up your message. Forgive me, but it's pretty boring. You want to get people interested, excited, enthusiastic about coming to your cottages. You want them to feel/see themselves relaxing and enjoying the beautiful scenery you speak about.
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