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Re: They hate my site =(
From Jeff at Ackley Uniforms on 12 March '00
replying to They hate my site =( posted by ALFRED

Off topic, but I'd polish your text a bit.

For example, you say:

"Our uniform carpet care technicians are our employees that are
specially trained to assure our customers the highest quality
standards in the carpet cleaning industry."

It would be better as:

"Our uniformed carpet care technicians are trained to the
highest industry standards."

I think you can trim much of the other text, as well.

In the process, your keyword density will rise which might help
the search engine situation.

I loved the part about your uniformed technicians
Ackley Uniforms Saint Louis

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