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Re: They hate my site =(
From trancier on 17 March '00
replying to They hate my site =( posted by ALFRED

no offence but i really think you need to clean up the wording of the text part. there are quite a few grammatical errors. remember your wording is what sells the product/service.

plus visitors do not like reading a slab of text that looks like it was hastily put together. present the information in a more attractive way.

change the drab grey look and go for a nicer color scheme.

also perhaps justify the text and/or space it out
pepper it with a couple of hyperlinks or space it out with some art. just liven it up :)

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